This essay is an essay that I will never be able to forget. I read hundreds of essays each year and this one definitly stands out. You faild so horribly in defending for your side that you were extremely successful in advocating for the opposition. With the essay prompt: Should we allow female students to wear pants?, you chose to write an essay about why we shouldn't allow it. However, because of the many hypocrisites and logical errors in your essay, one can only agree to allow the change in uniform after reading your essay. But will the school administrators agree? I don't know. No essay will probably persuade them anyways. Maybe some pressure from Gangwon's department of educatin might help, or some parent's complaint. Personally, I don't see why girls wearing pants is not good looking-who made up that nonsense? It's merely a stereotype of gender that lies within the society. Like how Scottich men wear kilts, men wearing skirts should also not be so special